everyone says i stand out; yet you walk right pass by

Thursday, April 30, 2009

U---FEED---NIT # 2


Respond to the following question:" they're also waiting.........type for easy marketing" (p. 80-81) Relat to marketing tatics in today, what's your type, ads get if have "feed", how often will one chat- if have "feed", and how would "chatting" affect modern ay communication?

... What does violet willingness to do this say about her personallity?Do you know anyone like her? How are they alike?


......respond to titus reaction to his parents buying him an up car (p. 96-97)...What does this mean?Write about your response to it.


This qoute is related to today's society becuase we hear and see advertisements everywhere. Growing up as a citizen in the Uinted States, I am very easily influenced to buy things that are advertise to me. For example: An advertisement about clothes comes on for commerials and I will be like " Oh my gosh, I have got to buy it; It's HOTT." I mean i'm not the only one who does this, but i do do it. So, i'll fall into the fashion catagory if I am suppose to be placed into a catagory to be advertise too. This passage brings me back to a question that was ask in blog one. The question was " The girls have to changed theiir hair frequently becuase the style chnage. What does thise statement tell us about new trend?" This passage bring me back to this question becuase advertisements makes us want to buy the advertise stuff. For example: Everyone wants the newest stuff to stay up with everyone else; so we buy advertisments to be on the same line. Advertisment are advertise to help the company run ; though we know that we still go and buy it; for it make a spark in the eyes of us. I have to say no one can run for advertisement as well as chatting. In my personal feelings I think i won't "CHAT" very often if i was to have a "FEED". I like to talk to people face to face and hear their tones of vioce so i can tell if their telling a true or a lie. By communicating with the feed seems to be a little bit not "cool" for me; becuase then it'll seem lieka phone. I'm not a phone person and or a technology person. So, yea. But it if i did have a feed i think i will use it to chat with others when i have a" SECRET" to tell my friends. But then besides that i think i will barely use it. While reading the book I figure out that it'll be very quiet and dead for everyone is like m-chatting. All u can hear is cricket crying, but ur feed is like working it's butt off every one secound. Chatting by FEED will really affect our modern day communication. For we won't have the loud noisy and happy moments that everyone will have but just giggles and luaghter that everyone thinks it's weird.


Voilet willingness to do this project tells one that she is a risk taker and a dangerous one. Well a person with half a brain. She is a person witha half a brain becuase she already knows that her feed is already damage but yet she wants to damage it even more. In the other charater I see then being taken over like robots by the FEED, but Violet is acting this project on her own well adn her own likings. By her doing this for her own liking it reminds me of many people that i know. They are like her for they know it's going to damage them or hurt them in away , and yet they still do it. They do it in a way that no one can understand it and do it becuase they want to or is carious aout the outcomes; JUST like Violet.

(movie to watch: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vnSegu4A5Uc&feature=related: sorry i coulcn't put it on here: i have technical dificulties. SORRY!!)

Titus responds to his parents when he found out that they are willing to buy him a upcar is similar to people whom parents are going to buy them cars ( not up car though) . It's similar to guys for they have girlfriends and by having a car they can pick their little girl up and eat dinner or something like it. His respose to his parents are not different from other teenagers response to their parents.


"We enter a time of calamity" means to enter a time of disaster. I said this people they are in a time zone that the humans are literly being teach and getting their knowledge from technology and not written information like we do. They are littering on the moon and trashing other planet; just not only earth. This also relates to the WAR in Iraq that we can't even find a solution too. US, as citizen can't even find or think a solution out. It's just like us being controled by the government; just like the feed controling the people.The people can't even think for them selves but letting the feed think for themselves. "HUMAN HAVE PUT THEMSELVES INTO AN ILLNESS THAT CAN'T BE CURED!" That is the reason why " we have enter a time of calamity" is to enter a time of disaster.









Sunday, April 26, 2009

UN--FEED--IT!!









  • What do you notice abotu the language Anderson uses? What is his purpose for doing so? How is it effective?

I notice that the languages that Anderson uses is the language that today teen uses and it's trend of language that is meant to be used. For example "if we were to take a time trian back into the 1990's the people that exist at the time wouldn't say " that's the ****" but maybe they will say " that's nice" or " buddy" instead of "dude"". Another example is the word "UNIT"--it's used as dude and it's a word that they invented through out time. THe languauge that he uses is slang. His purpose of using slang is to make the teenager more like teenagers for we-- teenagers uses more slng then just plain words to talk to one another. In my opinion i think that this language that is being used by Anderson brings more eyes and readers to the book. IT also shows somewhat of a real teenaegr uses and choices in words.

  • What do you know about thefunction of the "feeds" such as "going fugue" (pg.7)," the feed suggestsed'supplu'"(pg.11), advertisements at the end of chapters, etc. What does this all mean?

The feed is HITLER. IT is hitler becuase in the holocaust hitler took over or brain wash many people into doing the things he wants them to do and made them took commands. The feed some how takes apart at it by slowly taking control over the human body beign the brain for them and making the choice for them. The feed is also the technology for them( ipods, cell phones, enternet, etc....) The feed helps shows advertisements, give then songs to listen to( play for them), tell prices of things, looks up things that they want to know, give information, and let then connect with others that are far away. For example: "she would pause ans we can tell she was m-chattign all the news back to the friends down on earth" (pg.52) For me i feel like this means the ending of human beigns own brains but the control of technology at which was made by human hands itself.

  • The girls have to change their hair frequently becuase the style change. What does this statement tell us abotu the trends in the novels?
This statement tells us that everyone likes to be on top of the trend in this novel and that many new trend are out daily. Also tells us that new trend is not staying new for a longtimefor so many are getting it like the very next secoud that it comes out. New trends are what everyone in the book wants to be in or have. For example " when violet was wearing a wool and that e other girls was in the bathroom fixing their hair to look like the newest tren." It 's just like us, today. WE all live our life and have our own fashion until soemthing new comes our way than every one starts to get it. An example is skinny jeans: we all wear skinny jeans for it;s the new trend in the fashion world for an girl ( some boys also wear it too.) Basically it tells us that the new trend is the new goods form this statement.


















Monday, April 20, 2009

FINALLY!!!!----- today!

Thanks FEED!!
Finalluy we all get to start reading the book. I'm like half way done with the book and then they start reading it. i guess it won't hurt to read it one more time. It's actually a very very very good book..

huh, today was boring unitl i got to 6th hour. World history super boring, I.B tech- not good at all ( i think i fail that project big time- mines is sooo different) , Chemistry- pretty cool- like the poster walk, math- good, chinese class-- uhmmm--- tiring( maybe because it was in the morning)- i.b english- sweet ( can't wait to put everything together & finally we are actually reading the book " FEED" -- nice, huh)
oh yea. WE had the uhmmm.. what do u calll it.. uhmmm... oh yea. we had a badminton game today and our badminton team doubles was like gone, they all disappear on us for jobs-- jobs are nice-- i don't blame them for it. Anyway we won though. YES!!!
i did my homework. read the book. uhmmm. i'm bored.. ok.. i'll go back to reading "FEED" .

Friday, April 17, 2009

our moments

hahahaha..

we role down this steep hill
wondering if we will be safe

luaghing our way down
crying our way down
dance our way down
be retards along the way
and look up in the sky

when we get to the bottom of this hill
we'll recieve many bursies
be aching
and have blister
but we'll do fine
just knowing that we have each other



thanks for being there always-- iana--
CHEESE!!

ok?? friends??

So, today ( apirl 17, 2009) my dear cousin call me
we talked about true friends and people who we just consider friends
and those who back stab and those who didn't
Until that silent we had
After talking to her i finally realize that after high school all the friends that i have
and all those who i consider friends
ever the close one
The relationship between all of us will be like " none"
after the great graduation of ours in 2011

Friends

We grow up learning our parents are our friends
well at least i did

At the age of five
a new story of friendship starts to occur
and every chapter in this book grows

" a friends is a person to keep"
a line that many had told me
" a friend will never back stab"
a line many had said it's true
But all is a lie

my firends and i had seperated
we now have no clue of what so ever
it's like being brain wash by a wave
staright into the ocean
and getting flush up a toliet
being reborn
but in an older age

my freinds had back stab me
they've killed me a million,
trillion times
and what ever number you can say
but i have forgive
but never forget

The little mistake i done
the accident that i've had
they've kept it and wip me in the butt with it
yet i still forgive

for forgiving will make this bound we had stronger

but on that day
that very day
when they kick me to the floor
shoocked my head off my body
pulled my eyes out of my face
ripped my face into peices
like a woodpecker pecking on the a tree
slicing my body into chuncks
like a human chopping pork or beef
flodding my with their saliva
like street flooded by rain

this i can forgive but i will never forget
i carry this pain hoping i can find my so call " true friend"

the year of 2008 is ending and i've finally found a group of friends
that i share my smiles with
my darkes secerts
and my happiest moments

These laughter i had with them i will foever remember
these tears i cried with them i so will treasure
these crazy blonde moments i will forever freeze
the dance we made i will forever dance
the song we sang i will forever keep
and these promise we made i will forever swear i won't back out

we had soo much fun in such little time
we had soo much to share in such little time
came soo close
were so open
and ate up so much space
like a family
a group of sister walking in the mall
going shopping
we've done so many things
that i will never forget

but this is a new begginning of a year
this year is 2009

though it hasn't been long
time has just pass us by fast
we've changed
and it's not evern a year
we're sperating
and it's not even long
we're showing our differences
and it hasn't been a while
we're moving to different groups of friends
and it leaving what we've created
isolating one another
but saying we're not

how can this be
how did this happen
why

i guess
"true friends" are never
but "friends" are so

i guess
we'll commute to one another soon
we'll come back to unit
we'll come back to shed the tears
and the pains we hold in life, once again

so many has reject us
except for us
but now we're rejecting our self
instead of others rejecting us

my dear friends
i send this peom
full of hope
that we
the six of us
will forever stay strong
will forever stay friends
will soon be back
will soon come back

we will soon come back
for our body only left
but our hearts still stayed
( at least mines is)
no longer than this
can we with hold it in
we'll come back
come to survive
come to meet each other again
at our place
12 in the afternoon
luaghing and crying
being crazy monkeys
and smart geeks

i believe we will reunit
and not kick each other on the floor
like others done to us

I HAVE HOPE!!

--- to--- you ( who will know-
--- to--- them ( who won't get)

---from--me ( who worries in suffer)

Thursday, April 16, 2009

HARD TIMES

Many has said that when life is hard theres a place to run
but it seems like there is no place to run to
all the places in the world for me to run is full
theres no more room in this world to hold all of our pain
so, i''m here holding onto my pain and grief
Hoping that one day
just one day it'll go away
and i sit here long before the sunset
asking when am i going to be "unfrozen"


Forzen

Fall has disappear and yet my tears still fall
the leaves are off the ground
swept away with the air
but my tears forever stays in the soil of my foot

this platform that i stand
can no longer with hold me

every secounds that passes by it breaks slowing
creeping it's way into the ground
scraping the hard soil
running straight threw their soft blood

my eyes open wide

my mouth close tightly
the tears rolling slowly down my cheek
and i wonder in the dark starring night

hearing the owls sing their songs
the bats crying for food
these rats yelling for help
and the worms wiggling their way out of suffer

another tear drops

feeling sympathy
i twist
but i can't
i looked down to see the shining slik
holding onto my legs
like a giant holding onto his gold goose
it slowly crawls up my body
like the butterfly tinggling in my tummy when i make my speeches

then i realize
feeling the cold breeze
looking in the dark starring night
wishing and begging for help

i wake to notice
it's a dream
it's morning
the sun is up and the trees are white
the leaves cover in silk as white as the cloudy sky
the platform with hold piles of pillows
my body aching in pain
my heart as cold as ice cube

i move
and i can't
i turn
and i can't
i yell
yet my mouth is shut close
i blink
but a hand hold my eyes open

looking in the cloudy white sky
i have now realize
i am nowhere to be found
nor to be help

my death is here
my life ends here
the road of success
the journey of dreams
the smiles of happiness
the faces i see
the life i lived
will soon be a story
with a ending

this here
the land
the leaves
the hands that hold my eyes open
the pains i feel
the tear ripping my faces
and
the last breathe i'm taking will stay
forever in my head
until someone else's anyalizes them

i'm here
on April 16, 2009
under this peach tree
surrounding by white silks
and pillows
feeling the cold breeze passing by
the sky does not shine
the sun did not come out today
instead it's raining
raining white flowers

though my heart will stops
i will smile
and take my last breathe
mubbling " I'm Sorry"


-suayejyaj

there!! hahaha.. this is a peom or so that i wrote. it might be complicated to understand but yea. hahaha.. anyway i only hope that everyone enjoed it..

the peom is about a person forzen in the middle of April. That person's not really forzen. It's just that that person is going through soo many things that it feels as if that person was frozen in time. The pains that person carry will soon kill him/ her and the happy memories and dreams/ goals that person set forth to finish will then end. All that person can do is say sorry for life that she/ he has been given hoping for a better live; if theres another chance.

Monday, April 13, 2009

SPRING BREAK IS OVER

Man!! I can't believe it SPING BREAK is OVER. School is her again, it's like starting school all over again just in thte spring not the fall. MAN, today at school i was like soo tired. I can't believe it, as boring and as tired as i was TIME was ticking by soo fast. Cool, huh!! I was amazing yet i wanted to go home soo bad!! MAN!! MCA are like TOMORROW and WENSDAY!! HUH!! i don't think my brain is ready for it. OUR chemistry student teacher gave us a project to do ; as exciting as it sounds i am still not looking forward to it. I hope I do well on my MCA test. I am like soo nervous, but i will take my time on it. JUST so i can be sure of it. MAN MAN MAN!! i didn't even get my practice MCA test result back. HOHN never gave it to me and that one lady never came back the next day with it. I am like the only I.B student who took the MCA practice test and did not get it back!! DARN! Maybe that's the consequences for being a " YANG" or by so the last person on the list. HUH, O WELL the past is the past. I must live the present and hope the best on that MCA reading test. OH MAN!! I will tyr my hardest on it. I STILL can't BELIEVE it that SPRING BREAK is over and our prize for getting a spring break is the MCA READING TEST.. huh.. I HOPEEVERYONE DOES WELL ON THEIR TEST TOMORROW!! i WISH EVERYONE LUCK!!

Sunday, April 12, 2009

she's weird!!!

okies dokies... i have a cousin name kayla. she's super duper weird she likes to eat a lot of junk food. she's really into dancing and carzy stuff. i can't believe it that i know a person like her. weird.. not at all. for i am too ah hahahaha. everyone is weird. weird like her and like everyone that is weird with us.. ah hahaha., if u are reading this than u are very weird. for this is a really super duper not at all important message. ah hahahahahaha. how was everyones easter ?? was it fun? mine was.. ah ahahahaha. i think . lol!! i am getting high of nothing.. weirdo. lol!!! I ROCK!!

Wednesday, April 1, 2009

I am soo Dumb

Ok i lied i got it back.. ah hahahha.. slow me..

i am the dummest person ever. I have done soo many things that was facign the wrong direction. I am a bad and slow person. I blame Finals for it. XD it's really broing today yet it was fun in it's own way.

Crazy me

Wow! Today is April 1st which is April Fool day. I feel so slow and dumb today, but i did do very well on my finals for class. Don't you just wish that all the teacher will say u have a final, but they are actually fooling you because it's April Fool day.. Hahahaha.. That will be like the bomb. Anyway, i just feel really slow and very dull today. Nothing much to do and or much to see.. It's just really boring with finals and two hour in the same place with the a paper and a pencil. So, tiring yet so easy. I wonder; what are my friends feeling and how are they doing on their finals? I hope all of them are passing their finals , they will their very bright students and very smart.. Yes, all of us are going to pass these finals and party with cakes and other junk food. Love all of them, but i hate finals. It's soo boring.. Third hour is the most tiring class ever. I can't believe i did not fall asleep in that class, though it was extra extra boring. So, tired yet i have to got to badminton practice today too. AWwh man, i need some rest. So tired..(yawn) Bored? Me too.